drafting and planning

this is the layout i am going to use for my double page spread and contents page in my rock music magazine

i think that this layout for a double page spread is suitable as i have analysed double page spreads and one of the kerrang magazines that i analysed used a layout that was quite similar to this. i put a quote underneath both of my pictures because alot of the double page spreads feature quotes from the artists that also are usually related to the story so i thought it would be suitable to include a quote.   

i looked at multiple genre magazines for the content page layout (i looked at classic rock, NME, clash, vibe ect) they showed me that the text is usually on one side of the A4 piece of paper so it can also feature a picture of the band featuring in the main story. think i should of changed the bottom picture to a banner of a contest entry because i believe that having two images of the same band on the content page is a bit too much.